EAN: OMG Ean i really like your short story, because it connects to teens in the world now. and it shows how people try to b more like other people in order to fit in . but in life its not all about fitting in . and i really like it
Leah:
i like your Short story it was nice and i like how you made the character be shy at first and then the character became uncomfortable that giselle was smarter than him . i also liked how you started off describing the character letting us get to no the person .
Yoo Stephhh.
I really liked your short story , i realized that cool to you means to just make sure you have all 90`s in your classes than you can do w.e you want as long as you no your passing your classes. you had great detail. and it was insterting. hopefully there would be more .
Arden ,
i Like you story it seems like if you were to make it into a book it would be very instersting. i like how yuh focused on how cool dokota was at first than, once hawk stood up 4 hym self the story went and foucused on hawk. it was nice and detailed and live to read moree.
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